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The Secret teller would also like to say.

“ I keep wondering why it's so easy for everyone else, but impossible for me. Is it pride or insecurity, or both?”

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Hi! I admit, what brought me here is a contest. But I´ve found something beautiful and wholesome – this DA Secrets movement.


As for this piece itself: First, I would say I like this font, though I´m not sure if its the topic of love. It might fit the theme of insecurity, though. The colors look menacing, maybe a little too much – albeit again, this isa menacing issue for the secret-holder… My point is, it looks a little as if the piece was outright horror-themed. Maybe toning the darkness down by a little would have helped.


I like the way you´ve separated people´s preconception from „REALITY“ by visually separating the two parts of the text. It´s a nice visual metaphor. You´ve also highlighted the words „needing“ and „confess“ with red, which makes them stand out. It seems you went for pointing at the feelings/actions that relate to secret-holder´s perception of „weakness“. Similarly, you paired „cowardly“ and „weakness“ up visually.


Overall, despite the „horror“ colors, I like the way you´ve made this piece. It´s impactful, and there´s more to it than meets the eye. Good job!


Hopefully my critique was helpful. Keep up the work on this wonderful project, and good luck with your next pieces!


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